Angel's Cry...

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    Angel's Cry...

    She laid on the cloud,
    dressed in a silken white gown,
    her hair so golden…

    Her wings fanned out wide,
    she looked down to once green Earth,
    blackened by humans…

    Her heart clenched tight,
    to see so much good destroyed,
    to see so much hurt…

    The buildings so high
    they blocked the sun from the trees,
    killing them slowly…

    The long roads around,
    with the polluting monsters
    that travel on them…

    Children who know nothing
    of family, just of pain,
    as they hold their guns…

    And her cloud blackens,
    the hurt and pain just too much,
    as her eyes teared up…

    A single droplet ran
    down the perfect angel’s cheek,
    falling gracefully…

    From the harsh, black cloud,
    through the smog-filled atmosphere,
    it fell so far down…

    Just as a girl walked,
    looking around at the clouds,
    saddened by the dark…

    And it touched her face,
    just below her eye and slid
    down unperfect cheek.

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    MorsetBillie commented on Angel's Cry...

    03-21-2012

    wonderful representation of reality, poetically well arranged. Excellent work hey.

    nam1292 commented on Angel's Cry...

    02-23-2012

    beautiful as always ims so proud to watch ur skills grow

    ImStillHere

    03/21/2012

    Thank you (:

    KeithAColeman commented on Angel's Cry...

    01-26-2012

    WOW!! you are a GREAT writer. i LOVE this poem.

    ImStillHere

    01/27/2012

    Thank you very much (: ~Audrey

    Tempestlady commented on Angel's Cry...

    09-21-2011

    A Wonderful stream of mental images ending in an perfect timeing sort of way. I really enjoyed reading it and it was easy to read, didn't have to go back over etc. Write on..................Tlady

    Solaris commented on Angel's Cry...

    09-21-2011

    your poetry paints such a good picture for the reader good job

    ImStillHere

    01/26/2012

    Thank you ~Audrey

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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