Waves...

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Waves...

Crashing
       Crashing
             Crashing
like hot waves
Crashing
       over
           me...
My desires cause me
to suffocate...
       as waves crash inside me...

Then I look
        into
           his eyes...

In my heart,
I feel
Rippling 
     Rippling
           Rippling...
Ripples,
      like those of lotus ponds,
           Go out from me
and return
      Ten
           Times
                   Stronger...

His love-ripples
      encircle my heart
           and are
more sacred,
       more cherished
Than the
       Crashing
              Crashing
                     Waves...

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LenaM commented on Waves...

01-09-2011

wow this is amazing !!! the passion so eloquently written in powerful waves oh this piece is deserving of more than a 10 so with that in mind 10 +++++++++++++++++++++ and into my favs

ImStillHere

01/09/2011

hahaha thank you Lena :) ~Audrey

LenaM

01/09/2011

the descriptive way you wrote this including the waveslike way you placed the stanzas sheer genius

gogant commented on Waves...

01-08-2011

Wow, you bring the reader along on those crashing waves....one can almost feel the saltiness of two lovers riding high above the waters.............Terrific...................................................gogant

ImStillHere

01/09/2011

Thanks :) ~Audrey

Teardrops commented on Waves...

11-28-2010

Your writing is amazing thanks for a wonderful read my friend Marie

ImStillHere

11/28/2010

thank you for that wonderful comment :) ~Audrey

DeepEclipse commented on Waves...

07-30-2010

Balance. I like how you bring it back around. It starts out suffocating then ends breathing deeply. Nice. Enjoyed the unique structure.

ImStillHere

07/30/2010

thanks :D the structure is actually an idea i got from a journal i was looking at in a bookstore at the mall.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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