Right and Wrong...

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im really sick of being told that my beliefs are worng. :/

Right and Wrong...

I have my intentions,
I have my beliefs,
I have my own voice,
my own life to lead...

You have a thought,
that goes against mine;
Just because its yours,
doesnt mean its right...

No, Im not saying youre wrong,
dont put words in my mouth,
I just want to, on my own,
figure things out...

Yes I know
you want to show me the way,
but Im young and curious,
dont get mad if I stray.

'Cause no thought is wrong,
and no belief is a lie...
Everyone's different and the same,
all just living life...

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Teardrops commented on Right and Wrong...

10-14-2010

No one can tell you how to feel. You are a person so as long as it doesnt hurt you or anyone who can say its wrong great poem Marie

Sx9 commented on Right and Wrong...

10-10-2010

nice this sum it all up,this is poetry,inspiration,and you can live it,take to the store and be a part of it,it is your voice different from you true honest and inspired,,mature write love this,,walk good,,

ImStillHere

10/16/2010

Thanks for commenting :) ~Audrey

JadedJezzabel commented on Right and Wrong...

10-09-2010

LOVE THE POEM.....EVEN IF I DON'T TOTALLY AGREE WITH YOUR POINT....I CAN STILL APPRICIATE WHERE IT CAME FROM. NICE WORK.

live4contry commented on Right and Wrong...

10-05-2010

this is realy good!!!! you may be a new port but this is awesome. great work!!!!!! you know how people try to think up a perfect world, well i have to say (this is way off topic) there is no such thing as a perfect world (accept a world without sin) because perfect is a adjetive...accept when used when talking about god, it is a fact there. do u agree...no 2 people can agree on the idea of perfect world????

Sx9

10/10/2010

see your vibes,as poets there is a perfection in inspiration because we only write it it is from our soul so it must be pure,god has nothing to do with that,reality is the world that we live with,poetry takes us away from all that,I love god,but when I write my soul is inspired by him and what you see on paper is true and pure..

CDWillams commented on Right and Wrong...

10-04-2010

I love this so much. Just wow. High School life to a tee. Great work.

ImStillHere

10/08/2010

um... XD this isnt JUST about high school life, sir... ~Audrey

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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