You Didnt Hear Me...

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........ Yeah, it happened... :/ i messed up again.

You Didnt Hear Me...

I have the phone in my hand...
Your number's right there...
I stall and stall,
'cause Im afraid you wont care...

That I still kinda need you,
not in the way I need a friend,
but the way I used to need you;
I guess those feelings didnt end...

That I get this feeling in my belly,
when I see you with that pretty girl,
'cause I know she'd say "yes"
If you ever asked her...

So I press end, go on my way,
too scared to call...
Your name pops up on my screen:
looks like we are alike after all...

"Hey, whats up?"
"Nothing much, you?"
"Nothing really, just wondering
if we really are through..."

My heart in my throat,
I whisper "Why?";
There's something odd in your voice
when you say "This girl got rid of her guy..."

Tears start to form,
Cause I knew this was coming...
Its stupid, especially when
I was the one who ended it...

"Yeah, we're over."
My voice is sharper than need be...
"Are you sure?"...
Your voice making my heart bleed...

My head starts to ache,
so I finally say "Yes."
I have the feeling that answer
may not have been the best...

"Oh okay...
I guess I'll just go..."
I agree, but tell you
"There's something you've gotta know...

That I still kinda need you,
not in the way I need a friend,
But the way I used to need you;
I guess those feelings didnt end..."

And now there's an akward silence,
A pulsing, piercing drone...
Then I hear the beeping
of the dial tone...

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WriterGenevieve commented on You Didnt Hear Me...

11-14-2010

WOW Audrey - thanks for taking us on that journey with you - WOW! I love this My voice is sharper than need be..."Are you sure?"...Your voice making my heart bleed... and the ending is intense!!! Great job!

ImStillHere

11/14/2010

thanks... i've been through a lot of stupid situations like this. :D i'm hoping this time around might actually work. ~Audrey

MindNumbing commented on You Didnt Hear Me...

10-15-2010

Absolutely beautiful... the emotions just tear thru the poem. This should be recorded as a song. Nicely done!

ImStillHere

10/15/2010

haha a song? maybe... if i wanted to be the next Taylor Swift XD :) but thanks :) ~Audrey

Amber041792 commented on You Didnt Hear Me...

10-14-2010

I have to say that this is actually kind of sad, but for some reason I love it. definitly some deep emotions right here! amazing write!

ImStillHere

10/15/2010

Thanks Amber :) ~Audrey

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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