Two-sided Story and One-sided Ending...

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  • ImStillHere
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Poem Commentary

a short poem, but it has a point.

Two-sided Story and One-sided Ending...

Hiding, cold sweat,
and quivering lips...

Good intentions,
misguided attempts...

Lies told,
bruises hidden...

Always says sorry,
always forgiven...

choices made,
prayers spoken silently...

Grief settles down,
new victim under wing...

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HotPinkCupcales commented on Two-sided Story and One-sided Ending...

09-16-2010

Reading this made me sad inside... Wich is good. I like this one alot.

ImStillHere

09/20/2010

Thanks, I really appreciate it :) ~Audrey

OutcastAmber commented on Two-sided Story and One-sided Ending...

09-15-2010

This is really good. You Have talent. I like both the way you wrote its interesting.

ImStillHere

09/16/2010

Thanks Am :) ~Audrey

GUSTY commented on Two-sided Story and One-sided Ending...

09-15-2010

SHORT BUT A VERY STRONG AND WISE WORK. I LIKE IT!!!

Dano commented on Two-sided Story and One-sided Ending...

09-15-2010

short... precise and to the point... i like the unusual structure... i think it adds to the depth of the expression...

ImStillHere

10/15/2010

i like to think so. :) someone once told me that, if you add structure to a poem, it actually grabs the readers attention ~Audrey

DeepEclipse commented on Two-sided Story and One-sided Ending...

09-15-2010

Interesting. Could be like the sincere expression under the superficial one? The poem itself speaks two sided, the silent lettering vs the louder bold. Perhaps even through the back and forth, the ending always ends the same. Just my thoughts. Good read Immy.

ImStillHere

09/15/2010

hmm you have a point. i didnt think of that...

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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