Take Me...

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    Take Me...

    Take me,
                                               I want you.
    Tonight.
                            Oh please…
    Take pleasure
                                                in bringing
    me down on
                              my knees…

    Incubbus,
                                                 killer,
    tormenter,
                               the pain…
    Take me
                                                  all over
    again and
                                 again…

    My screams
                                                    in the night,
    your name
                                 and my God…
    Silly, I know,
                                                       as you
    string me
                                    along…

    But the pleasure
                                                          of you
    as you take 
                                    all of me…
    One touch
                                                            from you
    and all common
                                     sense flees….

    Help me
                                                               I’m falling
    apart with 
                                     each gasp…
    Wishing
                                                                that tonight
    will always
                                       last…

    But wonder
                                                                 and think 
    of what pleasure
                                      you hold…
    And deep 
                                                                   from within
    a monster
                                      unfolds…

    And it grows
                                                                    as it learns
    all of
                                        your tricks…
    Every knot,
                                                                      every bite,
    every sratch
                                        all the whips…

    Suddenly
                                                                         all things
    are not
                                          as they seem…
    Submission
                                                                         isnt all
    that cut out 
                                           for me….

    Take me,
                                               I want you.
    Tonight.
                            Oh please…
    The look
                                                on your face
    as your down
                             on your knees….

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    VaZFynest commented on Take Me...

    07-27-2011

    great write....very sensual...breathy......eminates sex oozing from your pores.......kudos!

    ImStillHere

    07/28/2011

    Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it ~Audrey

    slimgoodwoody commented on Take Me...

    07-14-2011

    Awesome poem! I love the structure, it provides a pause----- almost like the reader is out of breath, panting and speaking between breaths. Thats what I envisioned as I read it!

    ImStillHere

    07/21/2011

    Thanks :) That's what i was going for. I'm glad you liked it ~Audrey

    Solaris commented on Take Me...

    07-11-2011

    good poem love the bdsm refferance and it was very sexualy gripping good job

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

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