Simple Loving...

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  • ImStillHere
  • Hey guys. I know it’s been a long while... But I just wanted to tell you guys that I’m having my first child! Due Dec 28th!

Simple Loving...

Small caresses,
soft on my silken skin...
Causing me to shiver,
melting my insides...

Your hand in my hair,
combing through it...
God, no other man
makes me feel this sensation...

Your lips on my neck,
soft breath so sweet...
It's like, outside, there's a war
and you are my retreat...

Hands that are work-roughed,
gently move on down...
I sigh and stretch,
safe with you all around...

Pull me close to you,
soft against hard...
Whisper into my ear,
oh my God...

Muscles under my hands,
twitch, flinch, and tremble...
And it occurs to me
that loving you is very simple...

Because what you want to take
is what I want to give...
So hold me close and take me, Dear,
so that I may truely live...

Knowing we've simply loved...

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sevyn7 commented on Simple Loving...

12-15-2010

a poem of true love, and affection, thats the way love should always be. Very well written

ImStillHere

12/15/2010

Youre right. Loveis about safety and trust. :) i trust him alot, actually... even though i dont tell him as much as i should. ~Audrey

devaamido commented on Simple Loving...

12-05-2010

Wow! I don't remember any of the girls in my high school writing beautiful sensuous stuff like this when I was 16. 10+

ImStillHere

12/05/2010

hahaha no, i guess not. But hey, i might as well expand how i write :D glad you liked this and thanks for your comment. it made me laugh :) ~Audrey

RHPeat commented on Simple Loving...

12-04-2010

I love these lines: Muscles under my hands,/ twitch, flinch, and tremble.../ And it occurs to me/ that loving you is very simple...// Because what you want to take/ is what I want to give.../ So hold me close and take me, Dear,/ so that I may truely live...//-------they say it all for me. This is love at height. The circle completed. It's the complete poem. A poet friend// RH Peat

ImStillHere

12/04/2010

Thank you for this very special comment... ~Audrey

Chaos128 commented on Simple Loving...

12-04-2010

Ha ha It's ten o'clock. Do you know where your children are?

ImStillHere

12/04/2010

XD ha ha, very funny Chaos... :) oh and to answer your question... i dont have any kids lol XD ~Audrey

Chaos128

12/04/2010

Ha ha the question was for your parents : D

ImStillHere

12/04/2010

lol i know, i was making a joke..

nakedcity commented on Simple Loving...

12-03-2010

Well-written and well-versed. Strong passion and expression.

ImStillHere

12/04/2010

Thanks ~Audrey

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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