Chosen Star

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  • Hey guys. I know it’s been a long while... But I just wanted to tell you guys that I’m having my first child! Due Dec 28th!

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hmmmm i think this is a really good metaphor :D

Chosen Star

There were once
three stars in the sky...

One shined the brightest,
and filled your mind
with thoughts of love,
of life,
and of belonging...

The second was the biggest,
and filled your mind
with what was
and what you used to like...
of what you used to love...

The third was neither
bright,
nor large,
but so very old...

it filled your mind
with what you need,
of what you deserve...
and guided you through
the rockiest of Mountains...
and the driest of Deserts...

So when the Sun and the Moon,
pulled each other close,
to cover and love one another,
and gave birth to Her...

Which do you believe she Chose?

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Whiskers commented on Chosen Star

04-10-2011

I'd take what's behind Lore # 3. You have a good imagination and wrote an interesting poem. Blessings, Whiskers.

ImStillHere

04/11/2011

Thank you very much sir :) ~Audrey

jj1562 commented on Chosen Star

01-26-2011

i love how you ended it in a question isnt that the point op poetry to make the reader think. i liked it and i'd guess the 3rd

ImStillHere

01/27/2011

haha maaayyybbbeee... :) thanks for your imput. ~Audrey

gogant commented on Chosen Star

01-26-2011

"....curious volumes of forgotten lore." I can't really say what you are doing here with this......maybe there were three different men in your life, but your final choice was the one for you. Very nice in any case........................................................g

ImStillHere

01/26/2011

haha you got the metaphor. :/ unfortunatly i didnt decide, really... i just kinda gave up, let things flow. :) it works out tho, eh? thanks for reading ~Audrey

angelchaser commented on Chosen Star

01-24-2011

This poem certainly does make you think, in fact, it makes my brain hurt, your poetry is so deep sometimes, especially compared to mine. :D Loved this, as always. Miss seeing you in chat :)

ImStillHere

01/25/2011

haha lovely. i miss all of you from chat. i'll be on more often, dont worry :) thanks for reading ~Audrey

bubba commented on Chosen Star

01-23-2011

i like it, It's different from the normal things you will read, i like how at the end you ask a question, a simple question yet one that make's you think, so KUDOS

ImStillHere

01/23/2011

thanks :) i'm glad you liked it ~Audrey

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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