Lovers Dancing...

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Lovers Dancing...

To feel the beat
              and
move
with the drums,
          his
hands
on your
waist
          and the
bass guitar
thrumming...

Grind and roll,
          hips turn 
and hips twist,
         loving his lips
as he lays,
          on your neck,
sweet
kisses...

Crowded bodies
          on the floor,
as the band goes on
            singing...
And you 
      and
him
keep on going,
            lovers dancing...





 

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Teardrops commented on Lovers Dancing...

10-28-2010

I can see the dancer's and hear the music when you can take the reader with you and make them feel as you do then my friend you have become a true poetress congrats . Marie

ImStillHere

10/28/2010

:D do i get the cool hat and everything? jk :) thank you, Marie... I really truely appreciate that... you have no idea. ~Audrey

arronpalmer commented on Lovers Dancing...

10-28-2010

Amazing. Not only does it read like a dance, but it was so refreshing to read sounds as opposed to images. Don't get me wrong, imagery is great, fantastic, but sound is under-used and more difficult imo. Great poem Audrey :)

ImStillHere

10/28/2010

Thanks haha, i actually didnt think about the sounds, so thanks for pointing that out. :) ~Audrey

sgiguere commented on Lovers Dancing...

10-28-2010

I felt like I was a dance with my boyfriend again, it brought back many memories.

ImStillHere

10/28/2010

haha hopefully they were good memories? thanks for reading :) ~Audrey

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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