Eternity's Raft

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Time is eternity, and in this we all at one point must take that journey of love. I just hope it's a life changing moment for all..

Eternity's Raft

                             If I didn't have you, I'd be nothing

                All of the money in the world, could never compare to loving

                         You the way I do, or speaking you name

                   Floating on the raft of eternity, my love shall remain

                         Surviving the falls, face wet with emotion

                        Never to look back, oh the feeling of floating

                         Ever so softly, with guidance of the heart

                    Even with distance and time, shall I ever stray far

                    Because it's you, whom has me under lock and key

                    Learning so much experiencing love, here in reality

                          This isn't a dream, I know that it's real

            I've gotten to know all of the things, the heart has to conceal

                     And the feeling is unspeakable, feels oh so good

                   I use to read of such a thing, but never understood

                     Until the day eternity's raft, showed me the way

                       The way to you, where I was meant to stay

                           Only then, did I begin to understand

                 What it means to love forever, love grows in strands

                      Creating the strongest bonds, tell me you see

                 All that I see and feel, as I drift on the raft of eternity

                     

               

                        

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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