True Story

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True Story

                          Pants sagging low, standing on the block
                Fiends approaching left and right, he reaches in his sock
                     Hand to hand transactions, careless in his ways
                       No respect for freedom, no love for his days

           Approaching this young man, "let me put something in your ear"
                After that you can do as you please, I really don't care
             He agress and runs to a dumpster, to put his stash up in it
           I tell him I only need a little of his time, it'll only take a minute

                                              And I ask

                         "Why are you on that corner, acting a fool
                Don't you want a better life, why aren't you in school"

                                       He then says to me

                          "Man forget school, I'm not learning shit
                   And the things I struggle in, no one helps m,e with
                        I know standing on the corner, looks shady
                        But I'm sixteen, and my girl just had a baby"

                         My heart fell heavy, tears filled my eyes
           Because this kid from the hood, is trying to be a stand up guy
                                            To him I reply

               " I understand what you mean, and yes you mean well
                  But what good are you to them, if you sit in a cell
                   Headed up state, missing the years of your child
                    Because you dropped out of school, to live wild"

             "Think of your mother, and the heartbreak you would bring
               You have tears in your eyes, so you know what I mean
                    There are better ways, man I'm willing to help
                       Some things in life, you can't do yourself"

                         He reaches over, and shakes my hand
              I welcome him to one of the first steps, to being a man
        
                          


                  
                 

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BreeLove commented on True Story

02-01-2011

this was so real, and heartbreaking, because unfortunately its the story of so many today. what happened to the days when a kid could be a kid, and parents raised their own children, guess we just gotta keep praying, great write. Much Love Bree xo

WriterGenevieve commented on True Story

01-31-2011

I cannot tell you how much I love this - and the ending is perfect. I haven't been on here in a while - glad i found you and your writing again.

truth917

01/31/2011

Thank you for the kind words I appreciate them very much

felicesia commented on True Story

01-26-2011

exceptional work, very skillfull and filled with words of true character and life, bravo!

truth917

01/27/2011

Thanks my friend

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