Holding on

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    Holding on

                               To be in your ams, feel your heartbeat
                            Brings out the best in me, making me weak
                               Weak to the physical, chasing for more
                                  You hold the key, to open this door

                               The door to my heart, so much to give
                                 When we're apart, it's harder to live
                                   Harder to breathe, or start a day
                            Who would believe, things could be this way

                           To be in your presence, was a blessing to me
                      You showed me a love, the physical eye couldn't see
                            Took me to a place, one could only dream
                         A man now complete, do you know what I mean

                              To make love to you, is treaure in it self
                            The things you do, builds pleasure in wealth
                           The sweat on your skin, softness in your kiss
                             Nothing else exists, when we're doing this

                       I'm wise enough to know, I'm half a man without you
                          And as sure as the sun glows, and the sky is blue
                              My love will remain, only to grow stronger
                         To let go causes pain, so I hold on a little longer

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    Moorthy45 commented on Holding on

    01-10-2011

    The truth that love has immutable power of melting hearts is amply displayed by the author. Moorthy45

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Holding on

    01-10-2011

    I like how you use metaphores to strengthen the emotions of the poem and to make your point stronger. You are a great writer and I enjoy your poetry.

    truth917

    01/10/2011

    Wow.. Thank you so much.. You yourself are a great writer

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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