She has me..

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She has me..

                       She pulls me towards her, like gravitational pull
                    Feeds my hunger for love, leaving me completely full
                      Laying there breathing trying to, catch my breath
                                 Offering more, indeed I accept

                         Is it hard to understand, in her I'm understood
                         Together we overstand all, could it be to good
                          To be true, lord knows she keeps me chasing
                           No one ahead of the other, we run adjacent 

                         See y'all don't see what I mean, I tingle inside
                     Jitters in my stomach, like I'm on a roller coaster ride
                        This is what I feel every time I, look in her eyes
                              And I'm loving it all, anyone surprised

                      This love has me, out of control, speaking the heart
                           Over lapping my thoughts, no end no start
                           And in the lapping, you'd think I'd be tired
                          But her energy juices me, in her I'm inspired

                         She gives me what I need, like a battery pack
                           Or rolling down hill, there's no turning back
                  She makes me feel good, makes me feel like no other man
                    Could ever compare to me, she leaves me saying DAMN
                     
                           
               
                       

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Len commented on She has me..

09-02-2010

Good write!!!! I encompassed the entire world of brand spanking new, fresh out the box love.

ApaqRasgirl commented on She has me..

09-02-2010

that was wonderful dear, sounds like you have found your soul mate in life.....true love indeed in your words of this one, it flowed so well with your rhythm and rhyme......thanks for the great read.......loves ya asha

BlackButterfly1 commented on She has me..

09-02-2010

This is so nice! I love it when a man isn't afraid to place his feelings on display. Good poem.

truth917

09/02/2010

Being open is the way to be. how else will anyone know right.. Thank you!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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