I Miss You

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In Loving memory..........

I Miss You

                 Today marks the anniversary, of your five years passing

                  For you to be smiling everyday, to God I've been asking 

                          I'm sure you know, that I still shed tears 

               And as I sit at this laptop, I can't believe it's been five years 

                            Because for me, it feels like yesterday 

                     No amount of time, could ever take this pain away 

                 I still remember the days, when you would sit and hold me 

               The things you told me, the way to walk in life you showed me 

                             Because to this day, I keep it so dear 

                           And as every year, i wish I had you near 

                             I miss you so much, if I had one wish 

                         I would see you again, on the cheek i'd kiss

                  In that moment I'd say all the things, I never got to say

                  So for now I send it in whispers, every night when I pray 

                         I'm sure you can see, I grew to be a good man 

              Troubles in relationships here and there, still on my own I stand 

                            I continue to smile, not for me but for you 

         Because I know the physical is gone, but your spirit sees me through 

                       So thanks you for that, I know you'll always be near 

              I'll be sure to write again, if not soon then guaranteed next year 

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wiskeygirl5090 commented on I Miss You

08-17-2010

I really like this one its n one year for me i'm guessing its your mom or dad i should sy next month my 21 year old ephew will have been gone for a year this touched me thank you for writting something so beautiful.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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