Loves Death

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    Loves Death

                                    Heart rate raging, mind at ease
                         Everything's changing, dying from loves disease  
                        Remaining whole hearted, while it's broken in two
                        Love dearly departed, only to return I'm confused 

                                  
                               Time flies by, seems that it stands still
                             Tear filled eyes, down my cheek they spill 
                         Looking into the past, while I search for a future 
                           Heart damaged and lashed, in need of suture 

                                  
                                Ever so silent, yet screaming out loud
                           Heart peacefully violent, saddened but proud
                                 Feeling so low, but head to the sky
                           In search of a path to go, ever since love died
               
                            

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    ahardwalk commented on Loves Death

    12-06-2010

    I love reading from a males prospective on things like relationships and you painted this beautifully!! Nice write!!
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    truth917

    12/12/2010

    Again thank you so much. It's very much appeciated

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Loves Death

    12-01-2010

    I love the way you write! Having a male perspective such as yours give a lot of ladies hope. Thank you for sharing this write about loss from a male perspective. It is powerful and absolutely true about the many emotions one goes through during a time of loss.........E
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    truth917

    12/02/2010

    Thank you! Many men are afraid to show their emotional side. They feel it makes them less of a man when in fact it makes you stronger as a man. I appreciate the comment

    WriterGenevieve commented on Loves Death

    12-01-2010

    Wow this is one of my favorites....really powerful. Thanks for sharing...the lines about the past and future and your heart - really are expressed so well.
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    truth917

    12/01/2010

    Thanks for reading and enjoying it man. Your comment is appreciated

    1SweetAngel commented on Loves Death

    11-30-2010

    Sadly, I'm a residence of this place today friend. I know these feelings all too well. Fighting to find light in the darkness. Nicely written.
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    truth917

    11/30/2010

    It's a painful feeling but as everything else in life it passes..

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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