Moments of love

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My imagination ran with this one

Moments of love

                           Relax your body, tonight I'm going under
                            Listen to my whispers, soft like thunder 
                               Off in the distance, feel my breath 
                         The heat across your body, from right to left 

                                 Feel my touch, soft as cotton 
                  Touching an kissing, point to areas I may have forgotten
                             I see no problem, with doing it twice 
                     I have one mission, to take you to heaven tonight 

                       Put you hand on my chest, feel my heart pound 
                         Feel my muscles tense, hard as the ground
                               Kissing areas, I'll leave nameless
                      You're my star baby, I'm going to make you famous

                        My water dripping on you, like rain from the sky
                          You caress my face, look deep in my eyes
                                 Biting your lips, exhaling slow
                         R Kelly's Bump and Grind plays and echos

                             Off of the wall, hiding our passion
                           Ready to let go, I feel you scratching
                              And shaking, so out of control
                     It's like heaven, together we both finally let go
                    
                    
 

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Earth1 commented on Moments of love

09-04-2010

OMG! The wording is perfect. I'm a woman and bodily things happened when I read this. I need a shower lol. Nice writing

Iliketoflyaway commented on Moments of love

08-31-2010

you are always detail and precise with your poems. I like this poem because your were tastefully descriptive

beaner120906 commented on Moments of love

08-26-2010

This is an amazing writing! I really enjoyed reading this, I could reallly feel all the passion through your words!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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