Greed Of Man

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    This was the very first poem I ever wrote... back in March of 1981. I was just a little wolf back then. Young and inexperienced.

    Greed Of Man

     Listen to my story and see how we crave
    Of ancient days and evil ways
    How one must die to save his brother
    And the love they have for one another

    Crumbled kingdoms which now must die
    Buried beneath the earth they lie
    Broken homes and far away places
    Fearful looks upon their faces
    Starving children diseased and poor
    What now does the future hold in store

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    Olan01 commented on Greed Of Man

    11-15-2010

    Very good work, lonewolf. It speak volumes to me................Olan.
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    tierra7 commented on Greed Of Man

    11-13-2010

    My Dearest Friend , this was a bit of a tugger...another fav...so true, we see so much unbalanced in today's Earth....if only most could push out all negative away from self into the Universe so it can transpire into Positive...oh what a wondrous place we could be...Mankind has the Power and Ability to thrive and Manifest good things just as much as it has to destroy itself....A Dynamic Piece...Keep sharin'...Love and Light,Tierra@}-'-,
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    kdarcy commented on Greed Of Man

    11-12-2010

    I like it, its amazing what we started with in the beginning of our writing days, be well k
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    Kanicki commented on Greed Of Man

    11-11-2010

    Great Write - Greed will be the downfall of every society; it's the root of many problems-Greed an evil beast. LOL
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    REGINA2 commented on Greed Of Man

    11-10-2010

    Sad and true, my friend. A story that will never end.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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