Jerrell: My Crown Prince

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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    This is my first born, Jerrell Robert Andrew.  

    Jerrell: My Crown Prince

    I got the call, it said, to get here quick!
    Your girl's water broke; and she's bout to, drop your kid.
    So I, dropped what I was doing, with a hop, skip and a jump.
    Busted out the door and told the homies to, pik up my blunt.

    When I got there a nurse said, "you must be LE$"
    Hurry up and get scrubbed, your boy's in fetal distress.
    I'm like, how could this be? Me and my girl made perfection.
    Now I'm being told, they have to do an emergency C-Section.

    I got scrubbed; and hurried to the spot.
    Where my boy's about to be born. Right now he's all I got.
    I think it's gonna take a miracle, to pull him through.
    I'm not understanding fetal distress. What am I gonna do.

    The Doctor sliced her, then ripped her apart.
    Snatched my boy out by his head. I thought I swallowed my heart.
    But I didn't have time to trip cuz the nurse gave me the snips.
    She said, "cut this cord, from the momma to your kid."

    I cut the cord, and asked, 'how's his health?'
    Then held him up, to the only thing greater than his self.
    But I didn't hold him there long, cuz they took him outta my hands.
    They said his vitals don't look good. At first I didn't understand.

    I was told to relax, and, have a seat in this chair.
    The Umbilical Cord was around his neck; and his brain starved for air.
    I jumped to my feet; and then, fell to my knees.
    and started beggin to my Creator, to save my boy PLEASE!

    They got him stable, thank God he's gonna live
    But little did I know, that there was, more news to give
    Everything seems to be fine, my boy's playin and walkin.
    But there something wrong, cuz after a couple of years, he's still not talking.

    We took him here. We took him there. And after, test after test,
    We were finally given the news, that damn near, ripped open my chest.
    At first I was hurt. I mean MAD. Naw, I went BALLISTIC!.
    When they said, "your boy is healthy; but he is what we call Autistic".

    I'm like, "AUTISTIC! Can you be more exact?
    What medicine does he need? How do we, get rid of that?"
    I was told it's a condition. He'll have it from now on.
    Now I'm starting to blame myself, thinking "I've", done something wrong.

    It took a little time to get over that. There was nothing wrong I did.
    Cause I'm starting to realize, this is, one smart kid.
    He learns quik; and he, catches on fast.
    And I'm starting "not" to care, "how" long it's gonna last.

    Now it's fourteen years later, and he may appear to be slow
    But there is, something about my boy, that I, want you all to know
    He can count. He can read. And he's in, perfect health.
    He look's me in the eyes and says daddy, and I see a product of myself.

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    CLB commented on Jerrell: My Crown Prince

    09-10-2009

    wow, you have a great way of expressing yourself. As i was reading it i couldnt wait to get to the next line to see how you formed it together. great poem.

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    Your words and compliments are greatly appreciated, Most of this poem was the actual account of the birth of my son. He turned 12 years old 6 days before you left your comment, and he is doing great!!

    Cielo commented on Jerrell: My Crown Prince

    07-18-2009

    This is work to be shared, art to be bared. So many loved ones could benefit from your expression of parenthood, love and labels.

    FLAWLES

    07/18/2009

    Thank you for your comments. He is very special.

    AbysmalGoddess commented on Jerrell: My Crown Prince

    07-02-2009

    I started reading this poem, then kind of went into a rap rhythm and it all sounded so good! Those with Autism simply think a different way than most other people do, it doesn't mean they're in any way stupid. My good friend's brother has Autism, and he is one of my best friends. Your boy is beautiful and he looks so happy! All I can say is he's just so lucky to have as good a father as you, I can tell you just love him so much and he's the pride of your life, no matter what. You are blessed, because this brings the two of you so much closer together. Beautiful poem, wonderful expression, you pumped the feeling right into my heart!

    FLAWLES

    07/02/2009

    Thank you soooooo much. I have to admit, he is very smart. Sometimes I wish I could live in his world.

    jannifer commented on Jerrell: My Crown Prince

    06-19-2009

    oh my god this is great it is 4rm ur heart ur child is blessed and so r u hes here and healthy and thats great jus give him all of ur love and itll god him throw the day u r a great father happy fathers day this was really wroth reading more fathers should b like u this is a 100 all the way i have 2 add this 2 my favs i will be back 4 more c u

    FLAWLES

    06/19/2009

    I feel blessed to have such a gift in him as a son. He really is so smart.

    jademelissa74 commented on Jerrell: My Crown Prince

    06-10-2009

    For humans, Autism is -A psychiatric disorder of childhood characterized by marked deficits in communication and social interaction. For God, Autism is- A "man-made" disorder that labels the "angels of heaven" as individuals with language impairment and abnormal behavior. He is precious in all our eyes! You mister are a lucky man to have such jewel possession! Great Poem!

    FLAWLES

    06/10/2009

    Yes I agree. I have a jewel; and thanx for saying so.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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