A Perfect World

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  • FLAWLES
  • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

A Perfect World

A perfect world, is hard to conceive,

 

 

For there are those with hearts, set to deceive.

 

The air is polluted, preventing birds to soar,

 

with the fall-out of bombs, from unnecessary wars.

 

Too much attention is focused, on OTHER people’s lives.

 

Figuring out what someone else is doing, is how the world thrives.

 

Society’s values, are depleting ITSELF.

 

Are doctors really concerned, about someone’s health?

 

Lawyers are trying to get their clients, less or NO time.

 

Not caring if harm was caused, to your life or mine.

 

Unnecessarily sending, people to prison,

 

cuts off many years, like a partial life circumcision.

 

Experimental medicines and generic pills,

 

aren’t discovered for many years, to be making us MORE ill.

 

World hunger?  Simple.  Fill planes with food.  PUSH!

 

It can be funded instead of wars, declared by ex-president Bush.

 

Just like a straightening comb takes away hair full of curls,

 

It’s just as easy, to create a perfect world.

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BraveMoon commented on A Perfect World

08-19-2009

the simple pleasures in life.... "Women have simple tastes. They can get pleasure out of the conversation of children in arms and men in love." ~H.L. Mencken, A Mencken Chrestomathy. Wah'do, you seem to be liken to Sa'honi.

FLAWLES

10/16/2009

I agree. The simpler the better

photochick commented on A Perfect World

07-26-2009

omg wow this is now i think my fav poem of all that I ahve read so far this says it all flaw so deep so much truth and depth this is so powerful all should read it this is a great way to have the perfect world but so many make it so difficult when really its not if others would work together and I loved each and every line all of it so powerful i am left speechless and in awe great poem 10 10 10

FLAWLES

07/26/2009

Ah pho you are too sweet. You comments really mean a lot to me. But yes, it is true. Some of the greatest things we can do to help humanity aren't that hard at all.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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