Judge me
Crash,Burn,fall through.Die,cry,kill too.Stares,laughter,shattered mirror.They judge me like this.These blood filled tears.Different outside.Inside too.But They fucken judge me anyway.Not made to impress you.Laugh,joke.Do I really care?Hell no I don't give a fuck.Go run out of air.Do I care what you call me?"Emo Bitch Go Die".I won't let these words affected me.Their mainly all lies.I'm different I know.Get over yourself.No one perfect.No ones that good.So don't judge me you fail.I'm who I am and that won't change.If you don't like it.Don't look at it.I'm done with your games.Judge me
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- SweetBlood
- Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you
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CongoNetherland commented on Judge me
06-17-2009
- Format, spellcheck, and post. If you post, of course you will be judged. You posted on a site made for that. If you don't want to be judged, then don't post. You can be very, very successful. But don't waste peoples time if you don't format, spellcheck and post. Anger is useful but not an exclusive selling point. And check your capitalization. Don't treat the reader as schmuck or be lazy with what you give to the world. The world doesn't care unless you are willing to share your best. There are billions of pissed off people. They are a dime a dozen. Good poets - who care about their message and their readers are rare. And lauded. I feel your pain, but I know you can rewrite this cleaner, expressing yourself not just through tears and emotion; but through visceral art that everyone can understand. On the up side, I like the rhyme and imagery. Sorry for the grief too. Hang in there. You gots talent. :)
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