This Monster Killed Me

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    • SweetBlood
    • Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you

    This Monster Killed Me

    I stare at my wrist now.

    Seeing  these red scars.

    Crying cause I can’t control it.

    This monster in my heart.

    Strong  I seem on the outside but its really not true.

    Because inside I’m broken,damaged,used.

    The monster uses my body.

    Tasting this sweet blood too.

    Can you help me?

    Save me from my doom?

    I’m sitting on this floor now.

    Wishing to save myself.

    Save me from this blade.

    This hell.

    I crave away my skin again.

    I feel this sweet rush.

    Danger flashes in my head.

    That this blade might be too much.

    It might undo my soul.

    Set it free.

    Float above my body.

    Why did I cut so deep?

    I’m so sorry.

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    gregster commented on This Monster Killed Me

    09-20-2010

    is this literal or metaphoric .well if literal u need CHRIST....if not than u just got thinking this is crazy write..i went in there trying to tell u dont do it...and for a write to bring people in like that.well that is just pure talent

    SweetBlood

    04/07/2011

    Thank you

    loveswar09 commented on This Monster Killed Me

    12-12-2009

    So dark and yet so...good. I mean it sounds so painful yet totally true. Although I wouldn't really cut too deep cause who knows what would happen when where gone, right? Anyway good job.

    SweetBlood

    04/07/2011

    Thank you

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