You lied

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  • SweetBlood
  • Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you

You lied

Sitting in a chair.
Reading a book.
Blood dripping from the ceiling covering a hook.
The hook had a ring.
That use to be us.
Until you lied to me  and now your blood covers that hook.
You promised me you'd never lie and now you  lay on the floor nor awake or alive.

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lithiumblack commented on You lied

09-06-2009

"Tell me a tale of a broken heart, and I'll show you a mirror."-Alaister Meine- Good Bryanna, as usual. I wish this were a bit longer, but it's not really a complaint, just an observation. Good work!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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