Broken
Broken Heart,Broken Dreams,
Broken Soul,
Can't you see.
As I spin the world crashes along with my mind.
My heart,my dreams,my whole life flashes by.
And the tears I cry run dry.
So Good-Bye
Broken
2 Comments
- SweetBlood
- Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you
Broken Dreams,
Broken Soul,
Can't you see.
As I spin the world crashes along with my mind.
My heart,my dreams,my whole life flashes by.
And the tears I cry run dry.
So Good-Bye
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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Broken
07-26-2010
- I like this poem, and it is so how you put it. I hate goodbye, it is so unfair. It feels like your life should end, and the only one that can make it right is the one who hurt you and left you.
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lithiumblack commented on Broken
09-06-2009
- "Above us all a little rain must fall."-Robert Plant- This is a torrential downpour. Great piece, Bryanna. Short, simple and to the point, like a brick upside the head. Excellent.
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