THe Blade

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  • Sadness
    • SweetBlood
    • Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you

    THe Blade

    She looking at the blade now. Spinning it in her hand. Trying to make the right decision but she makes a bad one instead. She lays the blade on her skin. Feeling the energy rush. She presses down lightly at first but the waiting is too much. She feels the blood under her blade. As the lines grow. She can’t control herself so. The lines travel up her arm. As the blade falls to the floor. She kneels next to it picking it up once more. She lays it on her ankle now. Craving away the skin. Wishing not to be here and then a boy walked in. He looked at the floor seeing the blood. Looking at the girl. A beautiful one. He knelt next to the girl. Kissing her lips. Picking her up at the same time. Leaving all this. He clean up her cuts. Holding her hand. He said  “He loved her and  he won’t let anything bad happen”. That day he held her never letting go. He promised to protect her. And forever he will never go.

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    ravenrose commented on THe Blade

    12-26-2009

    I lke this one. it was good. sad at first then sweet.

    CherokeePrinces commented on THe Blade

    09-04-2009

    This is beautiful, you can feel the pain. It draws you in and makes you want to be there to help. Very well done.

    SweetBlood

    09/04/2009

    Thank you

    angelsaver commented on THe Blade

    06-29-2009

    that reminds me of one guy that i dated when i was younger. he was always there for me and always there to protect me from all the hurt from people. but 6yrs ago he was killed and that hurt me more than anything. i still to this day wish i could have him back.

    cottoncandi commented on THe Blade

    06-18-2009

    I really liked this poen its a modern day fairy tale...................................................

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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