His Eyes

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    Jesus can demonstrate hope to us when it seems there is NO WAY to have that most essential emotion....HOPE

    His Eyes
    His Eyes

    They were prob'ly brown
    Just like most around
    Not so different to behold
    These eyes of my Savior, you see
    But when there was just sin and shame
    They saw potentiality
    They looked through all my faults
    And saw what I could be

    I'm not a queen nor a President
    I've never won a Nobel Prize
    I'm just an ordinary girl
    In the eyes of Man
    But I'm worth dying for,
    Dear Lord in your Eyes

    Now Man will always see the bad
    No mater what I do
    And people always will criticize
    But I'm so glad you know my  heart
    And what I'm going through
    And I can still look up
    And just see love in Your Eyes


    They were prob'ly brown
    Just like most around
    Not so different to behold
    ....But I can still look up
    And just see love in Your Eyes

    ~~Original poem by Sandy

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    federallawman commented on His Eyes

    06-29-2009

    Devotional and true. To see through his eyes and to understand as he did. He has given you a great talent. As he did me. If every one could see the true our world would be a better place. But through your words others will see. Thanks again.
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    Writer1

    09/16/2009

    I so appreciate all comments on my work. Of course some are nearer and dearer to my heart as you can imagine. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment!

    UnworthyFather commented on His Eyes

    06-24-2009

    Such a wonderful portrayal of the love of Jesus! He is the Master Potter... we are the clay of the field. And yet we are unique vessels, that are shaped on His wheel! I am convinced that as God shapes each of our lives, it is done in total love. We may not like His direction and guiding hands at the time, but if we can just hold out until the end, we will be vessels worthy of His Spirit. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. 10
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    Writer1

    06/24/2009

    You know, the only reason I write poetry or songs is to bless someone or to uplift. But I need to thank YOU for uplifting ME with this comment. It was my "Daily Bread," just now and it truly touched me! Blessing on you & yours. ~~Sandy

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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