The Children

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The Children

She lay them softly on their beds
Each tiny body, curly head
The children, five, wet from the tub
The youngest not more than a nub

Her cries for help were never heard
Her plan that day to us, absurd
Undeserving of this precious brood
She lay them there, dark was her mood

So tender were her touches then
No indication of her sin
Quiet and soft-spoken, she
Who could have known, who could have seen?

So one-by-one she placed them there
Their lovely faces, dampened hair
Angelic-looking on her bed
A Mom was left - no tears were shed

The house now empty, strewn with toys
One less girl, four less boys
The tragedy was hard to hear
A Mom could drown her children dear

Some fought against it, some did not
When Mommy killed her entire lot
Was it the world she saved them from
Or should the world have saved their Mom?

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gmcookie commented on The Children

10-08-2010

We had a similar case here in San Francisco except this mother stripped her children naked and threw them off a pier into San Francisco Bay... Such a tragedy. I still think of those children sometimes and wish I could have been there to do something. This is a deeply moving and disturbing piece, my friend. It makes us want to hug our kids and cry.

Writer1

10/10/2010

WHAT A TRAGEDY! It continues to astonish, shock and dismay me that ANY PARENT could DO SUCH HORRIFIC THINGS to their OWN CHILDREN! Thank you for your comment. It is MUCH appreciated!

Rhymer commented on The Children

10-20-2009

Makes me want to hold my children closer. A person can only speculate as to what went through this persons mind. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com

Writer1

10/20/2009

I've studied this case quite a bit (since I'm truly a crime/thriller writer), and it is obvious that there were MANY opportunities for intervention for this woman in her mental illness. I think friends, family and the system failed her before she failed her children. Still, I can hardly think of the tragedy without "feeling" the last moments of the children's lives.

Mareann commented on The Children

10-19-2009

This is heartbreaking, and so so sad. I have four children, and I love them dearly. This saddens me to think of the mental illness, thats is in our country, and everyone just turns their head the other way. Thank you for sharing. ps, would you be so kind to share this poem on my web site. http://mareannspoetry.ning.com. I would greatly appreciate it. Thankk you, Mary A. Eaton

Writer1

10/20/2009

Mary, you saw exactly what I saw in this tragedy. I'm also the biological mother of four and the step-mom to two. I guess that's what caught my attention most...much like the Susan Smith story. I would be HONORED to share my poem on your website. Thank you for asking.

wheelsal commented on The Children

06-14-2009

Nothing harder than truth and you told this story with heart and. How tragic is this woman but her children are now safe from her. The father still mourns. Good poem

Writer1

09/16/2009

Sorry so late in responding to your msg. MUCH APPRECIATION to you for reading and taking the time to comment. It means a lot to me.

hdmac commented on The Children

06-12-2009

Very interesting twist at the end. I thought everything would be nice and sweet then you hit us with that murder. It's like a movie.

Writer1

06/12/2009

As they say, "truth IS stranger than fiction." Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! ~~Sandy

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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