My failure Demon

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  • shakeme4life
  • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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Never give up ....

My failure Demon

He's always there
stalking me , encouraging my con's
Leaving my pro's bare.

He makes sure i fail
is the sun out yet ?
With him my dreams never sail.

Constantly keeping me behind
I'm the train's caboose
like my troubles stay on automatic rewind

Feeling like i'm on a esculator straight to hell
I'm down for the count
Where was my saved by the bell?

Nothing stays down forever , right.
Imma hold on to hope
One day my goals will take flight.

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bforibus commented on My failure Demon

09-23-2010

dark with a little light at the end of the tunnel. just the way i like it. great job

shakeme4life commented on My failure Demon

09-18-2010

Thank you , you're so sweet ,thoughtful... i will believe and i do believe that is true...

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on My failure Demon

09-14-2010

You will reach the highest heights! Not by anyone else's measuring stick only your own, you will forge a path of success all your own.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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