My failure Demon

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  • shakeme4life
  • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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Never give up ....

My failure Demon

He's always there
stalking me , encouraging my con's
Leaving my pro's bare.

He makes sure i fail
is the sun out yet ?
With him my dreams never sail.

Constantly keeping me behind
I'm the train's caboose
like my troubles stay on automatic rewind

Feeling like i'm on a esculator straight to hell
I'm down for the count
Where was my saved by the bell?

Nothing stays down forever , right.
Imma hold on to hope
One day my goals will take flight.

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bforibus commented on My failure Demon

09-23-2010

dark with a little light at the end of the tunnel. just the way i like it. great job

shakeme4life commented on My failure Demon

09-18-2010

Thank you , you're so sweet ,thoughtful... i will believe and i do believe that is true...

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on My failure Demon

09-14-2010

You will reach the highest heights! Not by anyone else's measuring stick only your own, you will forge a path of success all your own.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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