Taking responsibility for my QUEENS

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  • shakeme4life
  • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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A conversation between men , about the treatment of their women ...

Taking responsibility for my QUEENS

Man , how can you disrepect a Queen?
You must be blind to what I see.
She possess the qualities of a divine wife.
she doesn't deserve to be privileged to strife.

You mess it up for Men like me .
The ones that know what to do for a woman like her.
How can you discount her so cheap.
If you knew her true wealth you'd weep.

Man, don't mess women up for the next Man.
If you can't understand, communicate , or handle her .
Let her go, give her the opportunity to know true love.
remember that our heavenly father is watching from above.

This woman is a natural nurturer , a fine cook, she fights for love
It makes you more of a Man , to help her than to hurt her.
I know it hurts to think of someone else holding her.
Yet imagine , her dying inside each day from you mistreating her.

You are still on your quest to find your best self , My brother.
Allow someone who is settled in life, wise, and loving to take her hand.
After all Marriage is more than just a wedding band.
you must be ready to take that eternal stand...

I see Women with guys like you all the time, looking sad
like a dog looking for ways to escape.
A Woman , who has turned away her family ,
just to show how serious she is ... still taken for a joke.

Man, I pray you get some spiritual guidence.
so that you'll know your true calling as a man.
You can't truely make it in this World without a plan.
You can grow , just seek for your inner truth, wealth.

Man, stop casting all the blame upon the Woman
when you both had sex unprotected.
Now youre mad when another Man is raising your children.
Would you  rather see the children in a broken home , then to let someone else take the lead?

Man, do this one favor for me ...
next time you see a woman your attracted to
Pull yourself out of your lower head
before you approach her .. these are our Queens

Our Queens sent for us , being treated like trash
NO Woman is better than the other, not a sister , nor a mother
we all originate from the dust ...so before we return to the dust
We MUST treat our other part with dignity, and respect.

Brother , I don't expect this to sink in all at once .
but once you understand better , do better , and teach
the young men coming after you , how to respect themselves
through first respecting their Queen ...

My Man , the father's of daughter's.. still disrespecting Queens
What a Man sows he shall reap  ... indeed
if after prayer, counseling , you can't make it 
sit her down, give her the respect she deserves.

Our Women give us all of themselves .. 
In how they try to keep us out of trouble .
how they take care of our seeds 
taking over the care of you , your Mother used to provide.

Sharing that sacred inner love 
their smile alone is designed to keep us going
their spirit is supportive of us, even when we fall short.
Loving your Queen isn't a game or a sport.

 

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am2anangel commented on Taking responsibility for my QUEENS

08-14-2011

great write and message that every man should read. loved how you brought a spirtual common sense to this piece. well done. -Tonya

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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