Twisted minds

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  • shakeme4life
  • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

Poem Commentary

The lyrical version of good and evil. the vantage point of how people continue to chase themselves around a mountain followed by their fears

Twisted minds

We can't keep playing this twisted game ,
chasing my mind insane again & again.

I see you Lucifer,
destroying the best of her.
Dressed in one of your many disguises,
trying to elevate evil to it's highest.
Im a child of god , so with you i'm bias,
You're one the World's finest liars.
making sure Hades stays lit with fires.

We can't keep playing this twisted game ,
chasing my mind insane again & again .

I saw how you came and blinded that guy ,
sucked his soul right through his eye , why ?
soon as one fire is extinguished,
here comes turbulance and anguish .
Sanctified winds blowing all kinds of mercy .
Praying that the day preceded was the worst to see.
We can't keep playing this twisted game ,
chasing my mind insane again & again.

  I hated everyday in the wilderness ,
Fighting to keep sane , while walking through the devil's brain.
Every turn another tortured vein,
See this is how it felt to be labeled insane .
like i was born to take the blame .
My future was destined to fail.
till God blew breath on my future's sail .

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thecross commented on Twisted minds

12-05-2010

a splendid lyrical rush with a positive and confident air at the end, well done

shakeme4life

12/14/2010

Thank you Cross , welcome to my world ... glad you like the poem , please stop back in ....

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Twisted minds

10-09-2010

LOVE THIS!!!! I FEEL THE RELEASE AND VICTORY IN EVERY WORD TELLING OF YOUR STRENGTH AND COURAGE. WONDERFUL JOB.....E

shakeme4life

10/09/2010

Thank you , yes , i'm coming for my spot , lol ... victory hooray

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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