Sometimes I Cry

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    Thanks BG26 for this 1st line hope you enjoy....

    Sometimes I Cry

    I cry sometimes when I'm all alone.
    The weight I carry has it's toll.
    My loving ways do me harm.
    I lay this broken heart in your arms.
    Words that have chilled my soul.
    Spoken from those I think I know
    Skewered my body on Vlads pole.


    Even as these tears fall I hold no hatred.
    My empathy for your weakness shall not falter.
    I will walk the mile to be sacrificed on the alter.
    My life I give and never will I be placated.
    Speak the evil hiding in your breast.
    Release those demons from your chest.

    I cry sometimes even in a crowd.
    Praying not to loosen these screams aloud.
    I feel the hot steel enter my mind
    For let your lunacy infect no other.
    I'm your brother please be kind.

    Each of these falling stars glisten on my cheek.
    I'm so grateful for this countless stream
    I'll cry a river till your soul is meek.
    I want you near to inherit the earth.
    So maybe just maybe we can dance.
    And find some joyful mirth.
    Please just give me a chance..............

     

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    dumplin commented on Sometimes I Cry

    10-30-2009

    I know of this feeling of the need to be rescued, but I'm always the rescuer that ends up with the broken heart instead.

    lucky62

    10/30/2009

    Yeah the wonderful world of sadness and loathing real bad time that was......

    CMarsh commented on Sometimes I Cry

    09-03-2009

    Hey Lucky Awesome poem and felt every word. Your choice of words shows that your love for her is great. Excellent job again!

    lucky62

    09/03/2009

    thank you so much i wrote this from a line given to me in this chat room......

    KristyLoren commented on Sometimes I Cry

    09-03-2009

    Awesome lyric and rhyme. Deeply written and expressed, Beautiful work.

    lucky62

    09/03/2009

    thank you my dear glad this touched you...........

    scrye commented on Sometimes I Cry

    08-30-2009

    Nicely written and a crafty penned little poem for a friend. Hard to write a whole poem on having just the first line to begin from. I liked this alot and am off to read another. Thank you for sharing this with us here

    lucky62

    08/30/2009

    thanks scrye your opinion matters to me so much..... lucky

    photochick commented on Sometimes I Cry

    08-27-2009

    wow lucky another great poem created from one line your talent just screams from this and shines of a true artist the imagery is grand the subject is great we all cry so every reader can connect to this in some way this poem is full of powerful lines so much passion in what you do great poem as always i enjoyed it greatly

    lucky62

    08/27/2009

    thankyou my dear this stuff gets easier everyday that I write something........

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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