The Eternity of Darkness

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    The Eternity of Darkness

     The darkness of eternity is sparked by my livid hatred.
    Those lesser daemons of patch work skin prance around my fire.
    Sing the ancient songs of ruin.
    Let your fathers wrath be known.
    Feel what I feel little disfigured gnomes.

    The wasted years of loving and living this promised lie.
    You will be happy, you will be joyous in the creation.
    I feel the hot salty bile rising in my throat.
    Shall I spew this tasteless life on the ground.

    The darkness of eternity is sparked by the rules of the creator.
    So that all his sons must follow, good or evil.
    I praise my free will, sheltering it like a last morsel.
    In the pocket of a hungry man, will he give the same to me.

    When Hell is soulless what becomes of its caretaker.
    Shall he pay for the workings of his dancing minions.
    Shall he return from whence he came.
    Shall the darkness of eternity collapse upon him.

    Maybe just maybe he will be forgiven, and take comfort in the thought he was doing his job........


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    latinangel commented on The Eternity of Darkness

    08-14-2009

    Your word choice here is just perfect. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
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    lucky62

    08/15/2009

    Originalmerlin gave me a wonderful 1st line this only took about 10 mins to write I like it too.

    ShawnaD commented on The Eternity of Darkness

    08-12-2009

    i feel thispoem deep in my soul.. idk if thats good or bad... but i love it
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    lucky62

    08/12/2009

    Shawna glad you liked it give me an opening line sometime and I'll lay one out for you.....

    photochick commented on The Eternity of Darkness

    08-12-2009

    great poem once again lucky you used Merlins line and took it to a whole nether level your words are that of a true artist with a deep poetic soul you truly do shine with everything you write powerful poem thanks for sharing it cant wait to see what other masterpieces you form from someone elses single lines they throw at you great write 10 for sure
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    lucky62

    08/12/2009

    always count on you girl to enjoy my meager work thanks

    origionalmerlin commented on The Eternity of Darkness

    08-11-2009

    lol seems you read the book right.. (not the sorted collection but the one where everyone eventually gets time off for being part of the whole show good write
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    lucky62

    08/11/2009

    Thanks teacher you started it

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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