Spectacles

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During a Legacy Fest 2000, art class, led by a Raggamuffin, Jimmy Abegg, I wrote this poem. It is free-form, and I will state that I had the most fun ever writing this poem. I will attempt to explain some of it, but I am not sure how much I will be of help (depending on word allowance). Here goes: The poem is written in four stanzas. The first two are repeated again in the third and fourth (the first is repeated in the third, and the second is repeated in the fourth). The main idea (of mine) was to write about something in a natural sense, and then describe what it might mean to me in a personal or spiritual sense. Incorporated in that is using thoughts and memories from my childhood, associated with my granfather (my dad's dad). (Gramp passed in 1983.) I hope you enjoy this poem, cause it was a blast to write and the result is much, much more than I ever expected.

Spectacles

Smudged window pane by tiny fingers
smeared paint strokes across painter’s canvas
dusty thick with mold and spores of mildew
stained yellow from years of finger print oil
worn like the gourmet chef’s prize cutlery
broken pottery will not hold moisture
scarred flesh unable to hide much abuse
scratched by the claws of numerous cats
bent by refraction of the water’s surface.

Still like the stalking stork standing in reeds
quiet as the air inside a book cover
cold as a wind-chill of an arctic blast
alone on the playground at recess time
helpless like the beetle laid on it’s back
lifeless as the shed skin of the rattle snake.

Smudged by my fingers as I tried to grasp
smeared as he tried to avoid my attempts
dusty after a long day’s cutting wood
stained by the many times he put them on
worn from many hours awake toiling
broken still because of his poverty
scarred as the back of his lord and savior
scratched by metal, wood, and flying debris
bent from when I sat on them that afternoon.

Still as he no longer puts them on now
quiet as his heart ceased beating in them
cold from lack of his warm and smiling face
alone just the frame and glass on the table
helpless as his hands will no longer reach
lifeless lying there, alone, still, quiet, cold.
    © 2000 Brady S. Brown

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Poemeater commented on Spectacles

02-04-2010

This wonderful work! Thank you so much for sharing!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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