the gift

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    the gift

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    when i think of her it's as if 
    i've received a gift
    the excitement and the anticipation
    of her parade
    and the life she has made 
    come alive in me
    i think of those days sunning by the river
    and kisses so deep
    she can see into my dreams





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    LeslieMay commented on the gift

    10-09-2011

    I love this. It's short, yet it says so much! I think 'trying your hand at love poetry' is working out well for you! :)

    Phission

    10/09/2011

    thank you so much ! love your stuff !

    gmcookie commented on the gift

    04-30-2011

    Aha! A new poem! And, me thinks, that spring is on the air when the sap starts rising and a young man's fancy turns to love. Long live the days by the river and never relinquish those dreams, my friend! Your poem takes me back there, lo so many, many years ago...

    Phission

    10/09/2011

    thank you so very much !

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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