top of the sky

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sitting across from her one day, i realized that her eyes were not just blue, but many, many beautiful colours, most of which i have never seen. they say we will witness new colours in heaven if we are so fortunate. i have already seen some of these in her eyes.

top of the sky

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your eyes are a thousand colours
ten billion others cannot catch the beauty of yours
i feel adored when they see me
and welcome me into a room

i love to look at you
those looks turn to stares
for my eyes love you, too
and those stares burn into long loving gazings

here is where your eyes do their delicate dance
a kaleidoscope of brilliant things
rings of color and hope circle me, wrap me
as fire burns twice in blue electric ice

and reveals this beautiful girl








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cttgad commented on top of the sky

09-20-2012

Loved the emotions and visuals of enchantment you bring out in the girl through her eyes. Keep writing. I loved it.

Phission

09/21/2012

my god, i love her. lol. sometimes i forget how much a part of me she is/was. i am reminded of her when i read the words i dedicate. i miss her.

cttgad

09/21/2012

There will always people who come into our lives that leave a lasting impression, a love that never dies. The hardest part is to learn to love them in a different way.

TheLastCowboy commented on top of the sky

08-22-2012

great write, Love how you tell of more than just blue in her eyes and how a look turns into so much more. Wish this was longer soI could read more lol GREAT write!!!!

Phission

09/25/2012

thank you, cowboy. i really do appreciate your time.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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do you love me 3
i lost her 4
home 2
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these days 1
music and dreams 3
point blank 5
the gift 2
breathing love 6
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one 3
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beware 4
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