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    Dark

    I can no longer stop the madness,
    I can no longer stop the beast,
    I've been stained by your blood,
    I've been killed by your words.

    Your words so harsh yet true,
    so painful yet addicting.

    I'm so tired of this,
    I wish it would stop,
    I wish everything would stop,
    the pan...
    the madness...
    the Hatred.

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    lonewolf commented on Dark

    12-12-2009

    sometimes to stop the pain and madness, you have to cut it loose. even if it means losing the one you love. good poem

    themommyof2 commented on Dark

    12-12-2009

    Now this one I like a bit more then your other one. This starts in despair and ends with a desire for relief / release from the pain.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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