Untitled - December 11, 2009

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    Untitled - December 11, 2009

    You're so seductive and so passionate,
    I can't help but fall for your darkness and your pain,
    You keep me wanting more,
    with your burning touch and wondering hands.
    Come my love it is time to dance,
    it is time to dance beneath the moonlight where the dead can last.

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    nonners commented on Untitled - December 11, 2009

    12-14-2009

    very nice i enjoyed this alot. dark yet sexy well done.

    SuperChick76 commented on Untitled - December 11, 2009

    12-12-2009

    Very intriguing, to tell the truth: I wish there were more. I especially enjoyed the last line "It is time to dance beneath the moonlight where the dead can last." Brilliant. Though, alas, I must take notice of your lack of grammar. No biggie, and easily fixed. But seriously, though, beautiful poem. Short but strangely sweet. I loved the image you "painted." Good job. :D

    stever commented on Untitled - December 11, 2009

    12-12-2009

    YOU SHOULD READ [ KILLDO ] BY ME..STEVER..IT STRANGE BUT I THINK YOU'D LIKE,,.,.

    themommyof2 commented on Untitled - December 11, 2009

    12-12-2009

    That's very imaginative. very different from what I write.

    KingHostile commented on Untitled - December 11, 2009

    12-12-2009

    This speaks of things I also did in the past I think......

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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