Void

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Void

I am hugged by blood stained hands,
and I can't help but shiver as I survey the land, It's dark and void of all color and light,
even though I search for it with all my might, Stop this screaming in my head,
do you wish for me to end up dead?
I'm surrounded by a darkness I can't seem to hate,
can I fix my mistakes or is it too late?
I am drowning in this lake of memories,
that are filled with pain and regret.

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Teardrops commented on Void

12-16-2009

You are never alone a wonderful poem loved the flow and read thanks for sharing your gift

WindsOfMemory commented on Void

12-16-2009

i agree. this is the kind of work that should be entered into one of those poetry books. 10 baby! :D

kpeery09 commented on Void

12-16-2009

Wow loves...this is another awesome one...it reminds me of one of my friends though, but I give you 10

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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