Last Stand

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    Last Stand

    I hear them call my name
    yet I don't listen.
    I hear my blood pumping faster and I know that
    I have just begun reaching my full potential.
    I've survived worse than this,
    I've stood tall,
    the weariness inside never showing.
    My face an emotionless mask
    I hear them call my name,
    yet I don't listen
    My head pounds as if sensing my distress.
    I know for certain now that this is
    my last stand.

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    XxCrys92xX commented on Last Stand

    10-28-2009

    wow, you write very good. keep up the good work. i would have loved to see more, =) -Crys.,

    Tempestlady commented on Last Stand

    10-14-2009

    Wanted more....seemed like it ended too quickly. A bit more about sells, senses, colors, tastes, touches wouldhave done it some good. Good start though. Write on.....

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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