The Survivor

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    The Survivor

    Here I come with such a force
    A force that we all feel
    I am released yet again
    From out I come and ready to live
    But will I be strong enough to survive
    Survive this long journey to the end
    For when we hit the end we are sure to find
    The sweetest thing to us all
    As we swim all together we fight for the same thing
    As we make our way in, death after death, we will die
    Every time one dies another one will take over
    Till one is strong enough to make it to the end
    To the end I will see, I am the survivor
    Nine months later is why I fight to survive

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    elieon602 commented on The Survivor

    04-13-2009

    thats good but what do u mean 9 months later, r u trying to say u r pregnant or somethin or were pregnant?

    WordSlinger commented on The Survivor

    03-17-2009

    This is very strong, I really enjoyed it..

    keithrberryjr commented on The Survivor

    03-16-2009

    great poem

    nakedtruth43 commented on The Survivor

    03-16-2009

    I was looking forward to reading this...really creative!

    randa commented on The Survivor

    03-16-2009

    feel like me right now i am pg with twins

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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