Your Work

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    Your Work

    As you send me your work
    As I sit here and read
    All I can do is think
    Think and wonder
    Who you write about
    I don’t know
    Someone you love
    Someone you miss
    Someone that hurt you
    Here I am sitting
    Finding myself thinking
    Why does it seem like you know me
    Today I met you
    But your work
    It is something else to write as you feel
    It is something to connect to someone
    Someone you don’t know
    Reading your poems, made me think it was me
    It is amazing how your work is close to me
    In what life did I tell you about myself?
    For the poems you write hits me
    They hit close to home
    It is like we knew each other for years
    As I sit here thinking
    Thinking and wondering
    Wondering as I read your work
    You make me see
    You make me read
    See and read thing I felt
    Things I felt for a long time
    How can this be?
    When we just met
    This poem belongs to you

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    keithrberryjr commented on Your Work

    03-14-2009

    amazing poem.great job.i really like this one.im sure this can apply to many people and you did a great job at writing about it.

    Silentbetrayal commented on Your Work

    03-13-2009

    Reading other peoples work is a good way to have insight to what a person really is like. Sometimes it can blow you away how similar a person you barely know can be like you.

    imjussayin commented on Your Work

    03-13-2009

    Probably my favorite one that you wrote I feel you..

    brandon commented on Your Work

    03-11-2009

    thank you and i loved it

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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