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    a replica

    a replica
    in a gun shell
    it's hell
    it's hell
    but it sells
    she was you
    you were her
    different schemes
    on the same scene
    for carbon dreams

    talk easy
    nearly flimsy
    but she paid those dues
    for a redder carpet
    there's simply a market
    for a smiling Scarlet
    fantasy tea
    where pots are replaced
    if broken by a frown
    the best in town
    far better if swallowed down

    Jackie paid a quarter for a dollar
    and the stage became her mother
    the glamour her founding father
    ask her where she goes at night
    when the starlit is fast asleep
    you'll get that famous smile
    with a spectularly rehearsed gleam








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    ApaqRasgirl commented on a replica

    08-03-2010

    wonderful write dear....I love the rhyming and flow and then rhyming not breaking it slow..........sorta a mirror to my new ones I've been working on........this is great dear.....loved it......you might like to read mine as it is so similiar to yours....its called "Muse the Poet" & "Must the Poet #2" enjoy..........keep em coming love asha

    gogant commented on a replica

    08-03-2010

    There is something hidden here.....could it be greenness over Jackie of John in Camelot ? I love the rhyming and the quickness of this piece, H-4 Wine........................gogant

    JACKiEL0VESJC commented on a replica

    07-25-2010

    Love It :).....................................................................................

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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