I apologize

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I apologize

I apologize
for I have failed
to throw too many words
at you

my thoughts, act

I've lost the will
to decorate your head
with more colorful drama
than needed

my thoughts, simple

If I've troubled you
by leaving out circles
it's because I went straight
to you

my thoughts, source

I'm sorry
for I have distanced
from inadequate personifications
for us

my thoughts, real

If I've disappointed you
for not showing up less empty
it's all the more
for you

my thoughts, take care



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Sx9 commented on I apologize

07-21-2011

yeah sometimes we tend to want to say much,but less is always good,then we speak in our heads,so why not throw blows,and save the words for vibes like this that only you can spin so sweet,,

craigderks commented on I apologize

09-30-2010

this is great, i love it. its good to see someone showing some flexibility of structure.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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use of words 0
per se 0
pioneer 0
the quest 0
wide awake 0
welcome to cheap dates 0
crawling for candy 1
all made up 0
necessary diversities 0
burial ground 1
I apologize 2
beyond this 1
my rhyme or reason 1
a replica 3
I stand beside 2
imperial revolution 1
what I do know is... 3
a split tongue 1
a slight of step 1
a once a year occasion 2
a death 1
that amazing light 2
the eye in question 1
my crowded wall 3
no facsimile 2
a vision 2
before I am consumed 2
Compunction 1
essential 1
gewgaw 0
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passed by 1
criminal 3
soul burn 5
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eyes to see 1
poker night 2
a hidden silence 1
you unfinished 4
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600 mile void 0
untitled love 1
said and done 1
is it warm enough? 1
a song bird fate 2
sad bird 1
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to my friend 1
untitled 1
Hello to Myself 1
in plain view 1
half note 2
your neighbor 1
to those who forget... 2
that day will come 3
all eyes on you 3
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dirt 2
within reach for now 0
red dawn surfacing 1
how close... 1
pictures do say more 2
forget not 0
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all is forgiveness 4
it bounced back 4
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My Dancing Queen 3
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glazed 5
flip side 3
easy now... 3
untimely 3
ignorance 3
exposure 6
one more time 0
inside out 1
queen of denial 3
another 180 degrees 2
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It's Always You Too 2
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only to return 2
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Look! No Guard Rails! 4
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Plenty Of It 3