exposure

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    exposure

    it is these pictures
    these feeds from the heart
    that say that I am there
    there in your courtyard
    placing what I know
    to be the best of me
    with roses of every color inside
    and a love so true at your feet
    I am pathetic in this
    and I will not hide it well
    a strength that goes without saying
    my standing behind what is felt
    aggressive,assertive,and available
    a means to offer my hand
    in this form I come to you
    as my only master plan
    to fill your trellis honestly
    and to keep your fountain clear
    so you can believe that what you see
    is also what you hear
    and it is because of these pictures
    that have made me come this far
    that say that I am there
    there in your courtyard

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    Crush commented on exposure

    10-10-2009

    very, very wonderful. it has been quite refreshing to find you today. i like your style and the way you compose. thank you.

    kdarcy commented on exposure

    04-27-2009

    I enjoyed it, will check your other works, thanks for sharing

    soulwriter commented on exposure

    04-17-2009

    The admire the use of words, the build up of the abstract to fully expose... Write on write on!

    HarverTomsson commented on exposure

    02-18-2009

    Welcome to my couryard. I hope you get enough sun. I'll try not to over fetilize. lol

    dahlusion commented on exposure

    01-13-2009

    nicely crafted…

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    Hathor4Wine’s Poems (91)

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    sudden shivers 0
    use of words 0
    per se 0
    pioneer 0
    the quest 0
    wide awake 0
    welcome to cheap dates 0
    crawling for candy 1
    all made up 0
    necessary diversities 0
    burial ground 1
    I apologize 2
    beyond this 1
    my rhyme or reason 1
    a replica 3
    I stand beside 2
    imperial revolution 1
    what I do know is... 3
    a split tongue 1
    a slight of step 1
    a once a year occasion 2
    a death 1
    that amazing light 2
    the eye in question 1
    my crowded wall 3
    no facsimile 2
    a vision 2
    before I am consumed 2
    Compunction 1
    essential 1
    gewgaw 0
    to be a better vine 1
    passed by 1
    criminal 3
    soul burn 5
    Thrilled 2
    eyes to see 1
    poker night 2
    a hidden silence 1
    you unfinished 4
    deep-diving 1
    600 mile void 0
    untitled love 1
    said and done 1
    is it warm enough? 1
    a song bird fate 2
    sad bird 1
    and so 3
    to my friend 1
    untitled 1
    Hello to Myself 1
    in plain view 1
    half note 2
    your neighbor 1
    to those who forget... 2
    that day will come 3
    all eyes on you 3
    Bella Claire 0
    a mirror's poor reflection 1
    dirt 2
    within reach for now 0
    red dawn surfacing 1
    how close... 1
    pictures do say more 2
    forget not 0
    I've missed it 3
    all is forgiveness 4
    it bounced back 4
    figure eights 2
    My Dancing Queen 3
    more to go on 3
    off its axis 2
    glazed 5
    flip side 3
    easy now... 3
    untimely 3
    ignorance 3
    exposure 6
    one more time 0
    inside out 1
    queen of denial 3
    another 180 degrees 2
    and we must 1
    It's Always You Too 2
    The Cult of "Education" 5
    only to return 2
    hollywood entrapment 6
    not so unseen now 4
    Look! No Guard Rails! 4
    you just made my day 2
    Plenty Of It 3