untimely

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    untimely

    I now find myself
    on this unfruitful mistaken course
    a rancid tunnel vision theory
    driven by the ass of my horse
    what I laid out
    was a map full of flatteries
    a winding and intangible destination
    prompted by a woman's madness
    gowned to the "t" pathetically
    with the soils of my anxiety's spills
    I have trampled through this muddy excursion
    instead of taking a damn pill
    wallowing in this ungodly stench
    of my own mind's diarrhea
    which could lead me so carelessly
    into a vault of borderline histeria

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    HarverTomsson commented on untimely

    05-10-2009

    Accepts responsibility for own mistakes, gives ribald hilarity to cognitive dissonance, she'll be all right if she doesn't take the damn pill. Loved it. touched by the angst that caused this bit of creativity. Better days are ahead...

    markrohaley commented on untimely

    04-22-2009

    right..the carnal mind is the enemy of God. We must renew our minds? The washing of the water of the word?

    Vincent commented on untimely

    01-12-2009

    She has a way with words and a sense of humor to boot, quit witty indeed, have 3 to 4 shoots of tequila and I bet she is a Blast, well done. smiles Vincent

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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