Dear Father

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    Dear Father
    Dear Father
    The good lord 
    From the heavens above
    I come to you 
    In my time of need
    I'm lost and confused
    And don't know really what to do
    I need your
    Guidance, sympothy, care and love
    So I'm asking for all of the above
    With you not near
    Or by my side
    I am lost
    And all alone
    Alone in this world,
    This planet
    And this universe
    So I beg of you 
    Please don't leave me
    I seek your guidance
    To be a better person
    To be better to my 
    Family, friends, 
    Enemies, and nobodies
    I need your care and love 
    To make me strong
    When I'm weak
    I want to be better
    Almost perfect
    Almost flawless
    I hope to be pretty
    And do the right things
    I believe my heart
    Is in the right place
    But I always flaw 
    When I'm on a roll
    When I'm on my knees
    And begging 
    For your care and love
    And when I finally 
    Rise to my feet
    Please don't leave 
    And think your time
    With me is complete
    Because the second you leave 
    I might just fall back down
    And may never rise again
    Dear Father
    The good lord 
    From the heavens above
    I come to you 
    In my time of need
    I'm lost and confused
    And don't know really what to do
    I need your
    Guidance, sympathy, care and love
    So I'm asking for all of the above
    With you not near
    Or by my side
    I am lost
    And all alone
    Alone in this world,
    This planet
    And this universe
    So I beg of you 
    Please don't leave me
    I seek your guidance
    To be a better person
    To be better to my 
    Family, friends, 
    Enemies, and nobodies
    I need your care and love 
    To make me strong
    When I'm weak
    I want to be better
    Almost perfect
    Almost flawless
    I hope to be pretty
    And do the right things
    I believe my heart
    Is in the right place
    But I always flaw 
    When I'm on a roll
    When I'm on my knees
    And begging 
    For your care and love
    And when I finally 
    Rise to my feet
    Please don't leave 
    And think your time
    With me is complete
    Because the second you leave 
    I might just fall back down
    And may never rise again

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    trocka7 commented on Dear Father

    07-14-2009

    Great poem, a beautifully epic prayer! You have great talent and must know that your Creator could never be separate from you or away from you, as it is a part of you. You are never alone, even when it feels like you are. thanks for sharing...
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    AdriannaJalyn commented on Dear Father

    07-12-2009

    if you yourself believe, then you will rise, i love this poem though, it has great potiential
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