What Do You Do

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    What Do You Do
    What do you do
    When your heart can't deside
    When you don't have a clue
    And nothing will abide
    Is it true
    That love can kill you
    Does everything you do 
    Make you blue
    And make every 
    Little difference 
    Between one and two
    Once you fall fast
    Do you think you'll get up
    Maybe it could last
    If you give it a small bump
    If you have a true love
    Hold on to it close
    It's like a sweet dove
    Inhale every dose
    Cause once it's gone
    It's never comin back
    Like one precious pawn
    The player seems to lack
    What do you do
    When nothing goes right
    When all you knew
    Ends in a fight
    What do you do
    When your heart can't decide
    When you don't have a clue
    And nothing will abide
    Is it true
    That love can kill you
    Does everything you do 
    Make you blue
    And make every 
    Little difference 
    Between one and two
    Once you fall fast
    Do you think you'll get up
    Maybe it could last
    If you give it a small bump
    If you have a true love
    Hold on to it close
    It's like a sweet dove
    Inhale every dose
    Cause once it's gone
    It's never coming back
    Like one precious pawn
    The player seems to lack
    What do you do
    When nothing goes right
    When all you knew
    Ends in a fight

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    Troubador commented on What Do You Do

    08-24-2009

    You need to format your poem into stanzas where each stanza contains an idea that iselated to the poem as a whole. Respect your reader, because they are the final judges of your work.
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    DylanAKayanN

    09/07/2009

    Troubador, thank you so much for your input on the poems that you gave me feedback on. I greatly appreciate it. you are one of the few that helped me greatly. I thank you deeply Dylana Kayann

    Troubador commented on What Do You Do

    08-24-2009

    I did a stint as a poetry editor for a few years and I am here to let you know that you got talent. You are not pretentious as others that I have read If I could teach a poetry class I definately like to have you as one of my students.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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