Nirvana (Haiku)

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    You looked so beautiful that day, it truly was nirvana. 143 :)

    Nirvana (Haiku)

    A lovely flower
    thai upon the eve of dusk 
    your beautiful face

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    TinaD commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

    01-25-2011

    This haiku really conveys great love for the person for whom it was written. Well done.
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    thecross commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

    12-12-2010

    you used alluring words that captivated the reader in my opinion and described your subject perfectly you managed to relay your feelings without making it common (haiku wise) or sappy I appreciate this write.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

    11-22-2010

    I love this one. The beautiful picture and the beautiful words went hand in hand. Well done.........E
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    Madelynn commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

    11-20-2010

    Yes Spence she is! So beautiful- and you completely complimented her lovliness even more with this perfect lil' diddy- tricky these haikus- unless you can really understand the beauty and emotion it takes to write one- and Spence, you do.-peace, hugz-Maddi
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    Dano commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

    11-17-2010

    as far as poetry goes you nailed it... as far as huiku goes you nailed it... nicely written
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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