A New Path

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A New Path

 

I could die this very day
The sun would rise, skies would rain
Life goes on within, without
My life's path overgrown with doubt

The crescent moon once smiled at me
The stars were hiding amongst the trees
I found my way by light of the moon
This path i'm on will be ending soon

A new path, forged through the fields of change
Where it leads is out of range
Exciting and new, though I cannot see
The day I die, today will not be

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Charlie23 commented on A New Path

10-06-2010

This is awesome Spence! I loved the rhythm and rhyme to it -- and the idea when I finished the last line made me smile a little...

redbloodink commented on A New Path

04-12-2010

"A new path, forged through the fields of change Where it leads is out of range" and the rest of the piece is so in range of being super.... red

Chaos128 commented on A New Path

10-19-2009

I concur with your conclusion. It's alway best to keep your options open. Good stuff, Sus!

kittman101 commented on A New Path

07-10-2009

this is an interesting way to look at life. knowing death is just around te corner, yet it will no be this day. Awesome way of writing

purplekisses commented on A New Path

07-07-2009

wow very emotional.................................................

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

SuSpence’s Poems (53)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Eyes Of Hazel One 6
Each New Day 16
The Tomorrow Dream 43
What See You 19
Nirvana (Haiku) 13
Sonnet 3 21
The Poetry Of Time 33
Mirrored Souls 33
My Open Broken Heart 20
Passing Thoughts 16
Sonnet 1 19
Ode To My Love 17
Angel With Butterfly Wings 20
Procrastinati
on
16
A Conversation in Appreciation 13
Miranda's Song 14
The Sarasota Blues 27
Highku 22
Tripping Stream of Consciousness 35
Along The River's Breath 51
Sometimes... 37
Transport 34
Love Never Knows 39
SuSpence's Dream 33
Ode to the Beatles (acrostic challenge) 18
The Generation Who Sold The World 30
Christine 24
Glenn Beck (Haiku) Compilation 32
The Tragic Tale of Alejandro Vega 56
Ballad of the Lost Man 32
Gulf of Fire (Haiku) 34
Fade to White 34
Ugly World 53
Searchin' for Love 26
Lost am I 28
Shards of Me 27
The Sadness, 10
The New Moon 18
I Imagine, 13
Lovesick, Lonesome Blues 11
SIX FOOT 11
Beautiful Poet 10
The Morning Sun 5
A Question for Love 13
Realm of Delusion 26
Simply Thoughts of You 9
Caught Staring 6
The Edge of the Headlands 3
In My Mind... 15
Thoughts of Natalia 14
A New Path 10
Daydream 12
Gone is my Sunshine 17