Each New Day

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This is a poem by Spence's niece, Alexus. I helped her write it and she wanted to post it on my account. She's 8. I think I should mention this is her first poem ever.

I wrote this poem because each I have another feeling. ~ Alexus

Each New Day

I am so happy, and I don't know why
So happy at times I even cry
And when I am happy I get silly and wild
Because I am such a happy, happy child
I am so happy, but the next day I'm sad
And then I cry as though I am glad
And then I get happier and happier
And it continues throughout the year
And then the next day I am mad
Because I lost the doll I had
Once, I even got an F on a test
I got madder and madder than all the rest
Even though these things made me so mad
I got happy because I got an A++ in math
As I reward I got a wonderful cookie
And these is why now, I am so very happy
                                                      by
                                                        Alexus
I am so happy, and I don't know why
So happy at times I even cry
And when I am happy I get silly and wild
Because I am such a happy, happy child

I am so happy, but the next day I'm sad
And then I cry as though I am glad
And then I get happier and happier
And it continues throughout the year

And then the next day I am mad
Because I lost the doll I had
Once, I even got an F on a test
I got madder and madder than all the rest

Even though these things made me so mad
I got happy because I got an A++ in math
As I reward I got a wonderful cookie
And these is why now, I am so very happy

by
Alexus

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kkirkwood commented on Each New Day

05-17-2013

very good poem for someone so young. keep it up you can accomplish great things through your writing

spbsdude commented on Each New Day

02-23-2011

This is an adorable poem, as is your niece. She is well on her way to a career in writing.

optimistic commented on Each New Day

01-29-2011

This is an excellent poem great rhyme and great that your getting good grades but most of all good write congradulations

killingP13 commented on Each New Day

01-22-2011

awwww thats so cute! i love how the simplest things makes her happy :) i want to be as happy as you Alexus

Olan01 commented on Each New Day

01-14-2011

Always encouraging youth to write and express themselves with verse; I find this delightful and insightful. Olan.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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