Transport

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Transport

This one is for my friend blue who is feeling a little blue, hope it cheers you up haha. But it is also about some things I have been thinking a lot about lately. I know some on the OP site hate when you rhyme with 'ing'. I understand your position, but I say with this write chill out haha. I was just trying to set a mood or a tone with the pattern of the words. So just read and enjoy, transport into a glimpse of my weird mind haha. I hope you enjoy and take the time to comment. ~Spence


Sadness, overwhelming
Sickley, lonely feeling
Cheerful, emotions ill concenting
Transport, neuropathways
Relaxing, music playing
Mind static, cracking, popping
Snow screen, casts a high sheen
Peer within, senses grow keen

Transport,
Whenever you are blue
Whoever you are, know you can too

Transport to devoid of the blue

Listening, warming feeling
Easing, slow my breathing
Re-wiring, central emotions
Memories, buffer, loading
Happy place, singing, laughing
Smiling, flutter and flapping
Give into yourself, you'll be happy
Crystal so, meaning savvy

Transport Blue,
Give in, your bird has flew
Whenever you are, know you can too

Transport to devoid of the blue

Changing, slimey, slithering emptiness
Creeping, crawling, dies inside me
Carcass bleeds, memory rotting
Dead thoughts burn, buzzards picking
Needing, wanting, finding within
The answers there, always has been
Sheep flock plenty, sentimental androids
Free fall, go now, spacious is the void

Transport Blue,
You know you should too
Transport wherever you are, dont feel so blue

Transport to devoid of the blue

Transport, Transport





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FranzJ commented on Transport

06-24-2010

I finished Rolling Stones Top 500 songs ever list - in it a great song is decsribed as a song that moves you and meams something to you and you can connect with it- you did that with this poem - thanks for the invite to read - PS ...ing doesn't bother me...

SuSpence

06/24/2010

Thanks so much Franz, I am glad you enjoyed this, i thought you might being a fellow music love. Peace brother, Spence

Artie commented on Transport

06-21-2010

Dude this is awesome!! With the song fresh in my mind (I just listened) it gave a deep view into your thoughts and feelings. The way it is written, ing or not, is fantastic - 10 from me

SuSpence

06/22/2010

Awesome! ing or not Haha. I am glad you listened to the song too, I think it adds to the vibe of the poem as a whole when you understand part of the inspiration for the poem. Thanks, Spence

DaydreamWalker commented on Transport

06-18-2010

Good read, man. I like the positivity behind that drove you to write this, it reflects in the poem, and I agree that the music you recommended does set a well suited audio backdrop.

earthly commented on Transport

06-15-2010

This is cool-supporting a friend to get out of the sadness and move to a happier place-I often have to tell myself to transport-Namaste...Earthly

SuSpence

06/15/2010

Thanks earthly, it felt good writing something positive, for a positive reason. Sometimes sad or dark writes are necessary, but writes like this lift the spirit, and make you feel good inside. I am glad you enjoyed this write. ~Spence

Stryx commented on Transport

06-11-2010

You are not old enough, but I detect a beat culture in your work. It's all good.

SuSpence

06/13/2010

Ahhh thank you my friend, you are correct sir! Haha. I always felt I was born 40 years late. But I look to bring this culture back, or die trying. Peace and Love. ~Spence

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

SuSpence’s Poems (53)

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Title Comments
Eyes Of Hazel One 6
Each New Day 16
The Tomorrow Dream 43
What See You 19
Nirvana (Haiku) 13
Sonnet 3 21
The Poetry Of Time 33
Mirrored Souls 33
My Open Broken Heart 20
Passing Thoughts 16
Sonnet 1 19
Ode To My Love 17
Angel With Butterfly Wings 20
Procrastinati
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16
A Conversation in Appreciation 13
Miranda's Song 14
The Sarasota Blues 27
Highku 22
Tripping Stream of Consciousness 35
Along The River's Breath 51
Sometimes... 37
Transport 34
Love Never Knows 39
SuSpence's Dream 33
Ode to the Beatles (acrostic challenge) 18
The Generation Who Sold The World 30
Christine 24
Glenn Beck (Haiku) Compilation 32
The Tragic Tale of Alejandro Vega 56
Ballad of the Lost Man 32
Gulf of Fire (Haiku) 34
Fade to White 34
Ugly World 53
Searchin' for Love 26
Lost am I 28
Shards of Me 27
The Sadness, 10
The New Moon 18
I Imagine, 13
Lovesick, Lonesome Blues 11
SIX FOOT 11
Beautiful Poet 10
The Morning Sun 5
A Question for Love 13
Realm of Delusion 26
Simply Thoughts of You 9
Caught Staring 6
The Edge of the Headlands 3
In My Mind... 15
Thoughts of Natalia 14
A New Path 10
Daydream 12
Gone is my Sunshine 17